{Disturbed.. A bit I think..}

{Disturbed.. A bit I think..}

A Poem by Hello, Goodbye
"

..this maniacs love..

"
....
I would sever my finger. 
I would chop off my hair. 
I would even scoop out my eye. 

In order for you, 
To love me true, 

I would do anything... even die. 


- DD

© 2010 Hello, Goodbye


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Never…
Never think in this line…
Because love is not something that can be snatched…..
But I appreciate your sincerity….
Loved the words you wrote…


Posted 13 Years Ago


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. i agree with ed ... that really ain't love ...


Posted 13 Years Ago


that ain't love, my friend

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

i just hope nobody ever loves me that much.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ooh! Very dark, but still romantic!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 16, 2010
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Hello, Goodbye
Hello, Goodbye

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