Innocence Lost

Innocence Lost

A Poem by Hello, Goodbye
"

..there it is..

"
When I say..
That my heart feels a different way
And I pray
Because the day
It looks blue but the sky's really gray
When I say..


Different places.. Different times..
Its never going to be,
Like I have always wanted


When I see
That the sun is only shinning for me
I feel free
Money tree..
It seems good but I just want to flee
When I see


Different places.. Different times.. 
Never will it be, 
Like my heart desired

© 2010 Hello, Goodbye


Author's Note

Hello, Goodbye
I wrote this nearly a decade ago.. it was simple but I enjoy its recurrent theme and rhyme scheme.. :)

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the poetry is really sweet and simple and the best part of it is you dnt have to think too much when you read it sweet and simple :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I enjoyed reading this nice poem, loved the rhyming

Posted 13 Years Ago


another awesome poem that I enjoyed reading..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Again I have to concur that the rhyming scheme is simple but that was what I enjoyed about it. It was a relaxing read, nothing too difficult to understand but still able to provoke thoughts.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cooler, thanx...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

simple but brilliant, rhyme scheme was cool, aaaaaa xxx bbbbbb xxx hehe... good job..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 22, 2010
Last Updated on September 22, 2010
Tags: Despondency, Eternity, Emotions, Gloom, Fear

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Hello, Goodbye
Hello, Goodbye

Bobland, NY



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