Residual Sadness

Residual Sadness

A Poem by Hello, Goodbye
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..a recurring imagery of a malignant dreamery..

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I had dreamt of being free but it was all a fantasy,
Every time my eyes open wide, I awake to a despondent slavery.. 

© 2011 Hello, Goodbye


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Sad but awesome!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Ah, the wonderful escape of sleep.
That's the premise for my Goodnight.
Excellent sentiment; well said, also.


Posted 13 Years Ago


so tragic, yet true in such few lines how you can display how life sometimes feels. Great peice.

Posted 13 Years Ago


one day, you will spread your wings . . .

and soar

Posted 13 Years Ago


short but powerful

Posted 13 Years Ago


If dreams allowed us to remain free, but we are forever trapped in our reality. Good write my friend.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Hello, Goodbye
Hello, Goodbye

Bobland, NY



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