'Kinetic, Magnetic Vision'

'Kinetic, Magnetic Vision'

A Poem by Hello, Goodbye
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..the vision vessels..

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Inside her eyes are magnets
That pull endlessly at my soul
I view them in picture form
They turn a heart thats cold turn warm.. 
I yearn to see them non-picturesque
To gaze in them endlessly.. 
So the magnetism can pull me inside them
To keep my soul warm for an eternity

© 2011 Hello, Goodbye


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i love the imagery &feel of this; very romantic~ ^^

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is incredibly romantic. I believe that the eyes are windows to the soul--this piece speaks to that sentiment

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love the imagery of the magnets you use. Well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very...Magnetic piece here!loved it

Posted 12 Years Ago


Interesting piece...very drawing..magnetic actualy :) i loved it

Posted 12 Years Ago


some have that power..did i choose them or were they choosen for me ..i didnt give this power to them they already had it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


your imagery attracts like the magnetic glance itself~

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice upbeat work. Lovely too.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 2, 2011
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Hello, Goodbye
Hello, Goodbye

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