An Allegiance of Amorous Unification

An Allegiance of Amorous Unification

A Poem by Hello, Goodbye
"

..el amor sin final..

"
We have this unique unity...

It creates a plethora of pleasant possibilities

We have malleable emotional dexterity

That will supply our love.. with.. 

A prosperity of amorous longevity.

© 2011 Hello, Goodbye


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This packs a punch and stirs the senses as does all of your work love! I adore this...a fav! xx

Posted 12 Years Ago


i love your use of vocabulary! and the rhyming seems utterly effortless, and yet very precise, very well done. thank you for the read request. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great choice of diction, the message is tacit...
Nicely done...

Posted 12 Years Ago


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great rhyme scheme and word choice - really like "It creates a plethora of pleasant possibilities
We have malleable emotional dexterity" - used to great effect here! nice job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I wholly enjoyed reading this poem in all its short length. The words you use are perfectly chosen and well integrated. The emotion behind it is tremendous. Thank you so much for sharing this piece. Great write :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


An expression of alliteration and assonance that transcends the bounds of awesome. Outstanding work as always, DD.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like the thoughts and the emotions poured into this short piece. The feelings are clear and overabundant.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on July 30, 2011
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Hello, Goodbye

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