Minty Girl

ordinary trying to be extraordinary

Gods best creation is woman on this earth...everyone is indeed different and unique in herself. She is a package of different emotions,feelings, thoughts and many more...

There comes a moment when she faces again the depressed situations...sometime she is great in herself..n sometimes she is worst...Again she wanna cry... and again she feels lone..

The amazing power of being feminine is the capability of overcoming the thoughts n feelings.. God greatest gift to feminine is this only..!

one moment she is strong n in another she is the weakest among anyone on this earth....unlike male they never show their emotions in words n they become the strong contender on this earth.

 There is a girl who faces new situations in everyday....she is quite ordinary who wants to become extra ordinary...she lives in fantasy world where she thinks that she is one of those ugly ducklings and one day she will become a beautiful swan...!

After crossing 24 yrs of her life she is still the same duckling she used to be....she still the childish and naughty...who likes to do nonsense stuffs..many situation gave her new experience and she learnt too but she didnt changed herself..she was true to herself and likes being her..1

Author's Note

#story to be continued

Reviews

[Raven Wyntermoon]

After reading your piece, I wonder if this story will lead into the development of this 24 yr old character and how it entwines the nature of womanhood.
I like that you capture the multitude of emotions and internal conflicts that all females go through but how will these descriptions/ thoughts transition to your lead character and the ultimate purpose/ genre...
I understand that this is a work in progress and will look forward to see more of your story's development.

[zesha]

thanku so mch for your review...i hope my work will beupto the mark.

[costa siwale]

i like the depth of thought in your story. very interesting. i would like to see how it comes together

[LimitlessCoffee]

I like where this is going so far. Perhaps try expanding on the comparison between what is feminine and masculine.