Poison

Venomous Ventures

Poison my soul, with the sweetness of life 

Poisons of the world, coursing through my veins… 

Poison my soul, Intoxicate my being, Gravitate my world.

Poisons of the world, rampage my soul. 

Rip it apart, intoxicate, engulf, embalm…

Dhoomify and lul me to sleep … 

My sweet poison, the bitter sweet sensations, 

Leave me naked in your intoxicating presence. 

Rip me apart, tease me and behold me. 

Poison me with your darkness, 

let the sensations gyrate, 

the soul curdle with bliss. 

Poison me with eternal bliss, 

With the psychological madness, 

With the torrential sweetness… 

Kill me with your poison, 

ever so subtly ...

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

Such an intimate idea you tell here, wanting poison to kill you, but in such a delicate, yet destructive way. Sometimes death does seem like such a hearty option, but we think about how beautiful it can be if we were to die how we personally wanted. Anything can kill us, but once we think about it, we can see how it can kill us in such a slow and interesting way that none others could picture. This poem is wonderful, I love it :) Thanks for sharing!

[Davidgeo]

Love, infatuation and substance abuse are a hell of a thing.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Wow!!! Stunning! Amazing! I loved it and love it so very much!!!
Great write!
:)

[marybeth miles]

lol that is one heck of a poem i love it it is so strong and entresting.

[Saddam]

a very emotional pietry. There are lots of poison in the world but above that all our inner darkness is most poison.

[Karthik Krish Arthur]

Sometimes as I read your pieces, I forgot my very physical existence and become an entity. An entity that is able to see this world and the ugly it is covered in, from a third person point of view. Many yogis have been trying to achieve such state through meditation, by meditating for years. But I have achieved it, not in years, but within minutes, minutes of reading your amazing piece.

[Bianca]

Like you said there is a lot of poison in the world but it is up to the person whether or not they chose to drink it. which is quite tempting because in life there's always that heart shaped candy that says EAT ME! and that bottle of black liquid that screams DRINK ME! - Merry Christmas!

[ZeStrange]

Merry Xmas to you too!! And thanks for the lovely review!!!

[Bianca]

Your rhyming without trying xD

[Sue Hart]

Goes to show I'm not a poet. By the reviews here we see differently. I saw the lure of the world. The temptations it sends out. Man is the world, but if it's poison, that's worldly. "Shrug." No matter how many times I read it, that's what I see. Just call me blind.

[Neon]

I hate seeing someone as beautiful as you killed but I love when sweet poisons of love someone pours into your soul only to make a smile on your face.. to see a smile and a glow of happiness on your face because your smile's what that makes the days beautiful and I always love seeing someone as prettiest as you feel ever happy and smiley :)

Keep smiling & Keep spreading the beauty of yours into the world to make it beautiful with your scent.
Your cool!

[Scott Metro]

Very descriptive call for torment. Excellent.
Broody....gives me the feeling that you would take it all in to feed the empty.


Enjoyed this a lot Ze...
Scott

[ZeStrange]

Thank you and Merry Xmas to you, Scott!