Tell me again.

Tell me again.

A Poem by Mary

Tell me again about why i suffer.

Why is it that I you tell me nothing?

Is it me?

Or have you gone off on a fling!!!!

 

Tell me again why i love you so.

Is it your smile?

Is it your eyes?

or is it the fact i only see you once in awhile!

 

Tell me again why i am bleeding.

Red stains on the carpest and beds.

On the blade of life and death.

ON YOUR HANDS!!!!!!

 

Tell me again.

Just explain to me.

I don't understaind.

You are nothing special, a beast of burden.

You only bring me hell.

No heaven atached.

 

Tell me again before i am dead.

tell me one thing.

Was it worth it.

Will there be gilt.

you have a mess to clean up.

As i bleed my last drop of blood.

Tell me again,

Where you werth it?

© 2008 Mary


Author's Note

Mary
ignore anything i made a mistake on griimadically.

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i agree... this was with someone in mind... though she didn't gut her wrists....

Posted 15 Years Ago


No person is worth cutting your wrists for. Nice writing.

Posted 15 Years Ago


grammatically. understand. :) I'm a -bad word- (enter devilish smile here)

Anyway, I think you need to keep up the rhyming scheme you started with, or else rewrite the first two stanzas and completely go away from the rhyming.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on September 21, 2008

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I am a generally happy person... but you wouldn't know that by my poetry... heheheh... ^^' not so good. I'm passionate about my drawing and writing. Did i fail to mention that I am not the most 'org.. more..

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