One Last Kiss

One Last Kiss

A Poem by Mary
"

idk... it rhymes and sucks

"

One last kiss

Just hold me tight

Your touch I miss

Your sent I love

 

Your lips so sweet

I could melt into you

Your soothing heart beat

Matching my own

 

Your eye's full of emotion

Some hard to understand

Vioce full of devotion

I want you so bad

 

So just for one night

hold me like you used to

This feeling so right

i could rest.

© 2009 Mary


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Spelling is good.

"So just for one night
hold me like you used to"

That threw me off... Is this supposed to be past tense?

And I didn't even notice it was rhyming DX

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Huntington, NY



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