As the petals fall

The Subtleness of it all

The earth breathes like my memories wondering aimlessly

Share my truth

Share my dream

Slowly it fades into reality

As the petals fall

I don't see...

I won't see...

I can't see death cause its not really a thing

The earth's breath has took ahold of my body

Away from my first home

She guides me to become a new thing

She carries me

She dances with me as if I were a bundle of silk

touching every curve and inch of God's Woman

Delicately, in the between of doing and non-doing

I seen that I was guiding me

Reviews

[Perdition]

Love the invitation into this and yes, death continues as I feel as well, in many forms though in truth we truly do not know. could but both perceived and felt which is good enough for me. Your own guide as well...what a wonderful outlook on living. A powerful read and a powerful invitation should your canvas be anywhere near this level. Thank you for this wonderful read as well as your inspiring outlook!!~

[Zola Reve]

Thank You so much for reviewing my piece! I read a lot of eastern philosophy and Buddhist books that gave me a different outlook on life. Yet also, my ups and downs in life brought me to this outlook cause all we can do is put forth change that we want and can see.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

We must each follow our own guiding star and our own dreams. I follow my inner spirit, trusting in the guidance that has led me all my life. I haven't always followed but when I've determined to take the helm myself, it has always resulted in my own suffering. Lessons learned. I enjoyed the read. Keep up the good work and great writing. F.