Only When You See Her

Only when you see her
Then you may somehow fathom the ardor
That my heart deeply harbors

Only when you see her
The veracity is clear
As if there is none to fear

Only when you see her
Can you grasp misery's truest cure
And fathom a heart so pure

Only when you see her
That truest love is no longer obscure
Hoping a place in her heart holds permanent tenure

Only when you see her
You will cease to wonder
The nature of the enchantment I am under

Only when you see her
You shall question no longer
This authentic passion that I muster

Reviews

[Bluet_Belle]

I love this piece:)

The rhymeing is great:P I suck at rhymes:( And a lot of times they tend to make things gaudy, you are one of a few however who does it well:)

this poem makes me think of my Matweh:P My forfila:P

I know this feeling, as does he:P

Great piece:) the emotion behind it is displayed wonderfully:P and its well worded and wonderfully constructed:)

[CarrieLynn {Chameleon A..]

Must be some very special girl that inspired this...wonderful write! :)