How

How

A Poem by Shahab Shahsavari Alavidjeh

It's easy to say How

but you'll never find how

things happened all the time

always

non stop

lost

left lost alone!

Hi loneliness

how did you become my first

last and only friend

 

© 2013 Shahab Shahsavari Alavidjeh


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This was good. I enjoyed reading it. Reminds me of a Simon and Garfunkel song, "Hello Darkness my Old Friend." I am not sure if you meant to misspell loneliness or not, so I am just pointing it out.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ooh. this was fun! i like this one! It's like nothing that i have ever seen before.

=]
I really lke this
my favorite part was
"Hi lonliness

how did you become my first

last and only friend"
I liked it because you completely switched gears there.
haha. lots of fun. Hope to see more!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 27, 2008
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