I came across...

I came across...

A Poem by Raspberry Rebel
"

It's amazing what you find going about your day, some things are so unusual

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I came across a crocodile

on the way to school.

His teeth were very sharp

and his smile was kinda cruel.

I hid him in my locker

so that teacher would not see.

He stayed there very quiet,

until frightened by a flea.

© 2011 Raspberry Rebel


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Awesome! My preschoolers will love this poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ferocious things those fleas! Very amusing Sugar.
Regards.
*bird*

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a sweet humorous write, but in truth a lot of kids do hide things in their locker. Excellent poem

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 18, 2011
Last Updated on June 18, 2011
Tags: Children, Fun

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Raspberry Rebel
Raspberry Rebel

Liverpool, Netherley, United Kingdom



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