Dull Day

Dull Day

A Poem by Raspberry Rebel
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Where did the blooming SUN go?

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rain
tumbles down
pitter, drip, patter
miserable, grey, damp, cold
wet

© 2011 Raspberry Rebel


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Raspberry Rebel
cinquain

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Lovely use of the cinquain structure.

Posted 12 Years Ago


It sounds like a Monday! another sweet write.
*bird~*

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sounds familiar C, we are Brits though and so this sounds like an average summer day lol, you'd only grumble if it was too hot. It is good for the flowers and no matter how much it rains we will still get a hose pipe ban lol. Love the beautiful brevity, keep em' coming

Posted 12 Years Ago


Love this cinquain!
Love the pitter, drip, patter!

Posted 12 Years Ago


i LOVE THE RAIN....
THIS IS LOVELY

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wonderful imagery.
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on August 2, 2011
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Raspberry Rebel
Raspberry Rebel

Liverpool, Netherley, United Kingdom



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