The first mistake
A band of soldiers finds diplomacy in the dreg forest comes with consequences.
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Kaiodem

Kaiodem

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I haven't been on in a long time. Will start critiquing more often 10/12/13

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http://kaistclaire.blogspot.com/
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About Me

Welcome, my lovelies. My name is Kai, and I'm an aspiring young adult writer. I am currently revising my YA paranormal romance.

Some things about me:
I love tea.
My favorite band is Five Finger Death Punch and Pierce the Veil.
I love concerts.
I'm a vegetarian.
I procrastinate a lot.

If you end up liking my writing, you should visit my blog: http://kaistclaire.blogspot.com

Oh, and by the way, you can call me Kai.

:)

CRITIQUE ME, AND I'LL CRITIQUE BACK :)


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Posted 4 Years Ago


Hi, thanks for your friendship.

"Crown Court Censored Poet" (2009-2014)
Using Poetry I fought back against family racism, directed towards my newborn mixed race Daughter. Crown court then censored that poetry for five years.

The Elusive Mr Dunne

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Posted 5 Years Ago


thanks alot for the review. its nice to have some constructive criticsm instead of... "it was good" or "i liked it" lol. ill take all of your thoughts into concideration :)