Sounds of sin.

Struggling to do something for a competition. Then this monster came into my mind! Not for the faint hearted!

Sounds of sin?

The sickening squelch as a knife goes in!

The breath stenched, titter of the rapist's laugh!

The surging bubbles of the acid bath!

 

(Sounds of sin?}

The rattle of your stalker at your garden gate!

The scream of the suicide who meets their fate!

The moan of the mother on abortionist's bed!

The hiss of the bullet as it exits head.

 

(Sounds of sin?)

The 'rustle' of the glove; clamped over mouth!

Gouge in your face and an eye 'plops' out!

The 'fizz ' of the Rohypnol in the young girl's drink.

Then blood and water as it 'swirls' down the sink!

 

(Sounds of Sin?)

 

The 'thud' of the hammer and a bone goes 'crack'.

Paralizing 'click' as a backbone snaps,

'Splintering' sounds of  man on a rack.

The bloody hacks of machette attack.

 

(Sounds of sin?)

 

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Sounds of sin!

Sounds that bring nightmares!

 

 

 

Author's Note

Not all sounds are cosy!

Reviews

[Cherrie Palmer]

it is amazing that when we are unconscious we can have a memory of that function and not of the event. You may not even know that this memory is there until you duplicate that sound/smell. No not all sounds are cozy and you nail it with this piece.

[B MacGregor]

Oh, what fun... can I try?

The sounds of sin?
My ATM decides to beep back
Shuffling my card in its pack
Keeping it safe with my money
Charging a fee that ain't so funny.
Motherf$#%^#K9+s!

You've won me over. You're stellar and spectacular, invoking vivid images. I wonder what sin smells like? Don't you?

[Donald Meikle]

Then again It's sometimes a blessing to be partially deaf. Some sinning is fun for the bold, at least that's what I've been told. And just today I got old

[Amanda]

whoa, what a descriptive write! it make the imagination work overtime and you are right...not all sounds are cozy....

well done.

Amanda

[Little Amy Lee]

Loved this
=]
good work