The Knight & the dead angel

A wrangle between a man and his dead bride A dream I once had...

She!
I love the way your heart holds on,
To our memories yet they're gone,
But enough! they envenom you,
I beg you to let me pass through.

Here you are on your knees again.
Trying to fight that freezing pain,

Just oblivion will help you now,
Please let me go before you drown.

He!
Don’t ever again demand such thing!
Our memory is lovely slaying.
But its tightly sealed, my frigid heart.
Hollowed, bereft, a dim void of dark

And do you deem letting go is mine?
And I can simply control my mind?
I don’t want your shadow to wither.
I'll cling to your memory forever.

She!
I want you to feel love again!
To break away this phase of pain.
I cannot rest ever in my grave,
And your grey moans for my soul crave.

I adored you, still, and evermore,
Until we meet like days of yore,
But past is done and I have wilt,
Let this frost upon your heart melt!

He!
Do you really think you hold me back?
You are my light in this age of black.
I can't survive alone, my princess!
To be yours is my holy sentence.

I dream daily under spell of night,
Until the crimsoned beam of twilight,
And amid the kind and blue monsoon,
To meet you my love, when I die soon.

She!
You live in a world of fantasy.
Please don't make grief your destiny!
Where is my inviolable, strong knight?
My love and savior from all frights.

You are now so weakened by grief.
You know no joy, love, or relief.
Submit! God's word is done and said.
"You're so close to me, you're nearly dead!"

He!
I wallow when I recall your smiles,
I hide behind weary and false veils,
To find a place to go wild inside,
And retrieve your eyes that made me blind.

Blind I am! I can no longer see...
Anyone, any woman who is worthy.
You dwell profoundly inside my soul,
You spread your appeal within me whole.

My bosom will never hold but you.
My gleaming angel, my blossom blue,
I trust we will meet again and bloom,
All alone, beyond the silver moon.

 

Author's Note

"You're so close to me, you're nearly dead!" this is the only line that goes out of meter because its something special and means much to me!

Blossom Blue is her nickname!

Reviews

[LA Lorena]

I had tried to review this several times, but I guess you had closed it to do some tweaking. Glad you now have it available to view. It was most lovely. Your dark style is beginning to grow on me. I am sure that you will one day hold her once again beyond the moon.

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

Thank you
yeah that right, currently I am working hard to apply prof. meters on my poetry so it will go messy a bit before settling - its quite hard!!

I hope so too, thank you for your kind wishes

[Monster ^.^]

A dialogue poem! Now, I haven't thought of that! It is really a strong poem, and a serious one at that. You are right, this is truly different from my 'The Bride and Groom Kiss'! :)

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

Thank you :)
I told you its quite the opposite

[Monster ^.^]

Indeed! :) it is very good, btw :)