I Dream

a small poem about my third favorite pass-time (thirded only by writing, and video games), history .

    I dream of ancient times, a sword by my side, a shining helmet as my crown, a league of soldiers under my control.
    I dream of ancient times, a world ruled by philosophy. Scribe recording events that will shine and be known as awe inspiring feats.
    I dream of ancient times, the fearful siege weapons towering over soldiers tall, hurling massive boulders toward city gates.
    I... Dream of ancient times.

Author's Note

This poem is subject to change to lengthen it.

Reviews

[Lorraine Pearson]

I like it as it is right now...but I'm excited to see where you may be taking it. Nice piece you have put together.
~Lorraiyne

[sadxdeathxsuicide]

wow , it feels like you actually are in the position of the character in your poem

[Eagle Cruagh]

This is vivid recall. The dream becomes
almost real in the telling.
Nice poem.
Well done.
----- Eagle Cruagh