Does this make sense?

Does this make sense?

A Poem by Albert Freeman
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Random Nonsense Contest :)

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Does this make sense?

 

Match wits with mensa

This is the odyssey

Websters family encyclopedia

Yes indeed I see

 

Into the labyrinth we go

I here mirriam webster on a dictionary

Houghton mifflin can't speak english

Did you know I saw a red dog?

 

Off to the vanishing tower

A crucible of a mad trial it will be

A complete home decorating

Public libraries used as a reference

 

Hanging curtains walking away

Basket weaving 101 shouts all around

Back to mensa matching wits

is this the odyssey?

© 2008 Albert Freeman


Author's Note

Albert Freeman
Constructive criticism is always welcome.

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I read this one and laughed out loud. Were the sentences "Yes, indeed I see," and "Did you know I saw a red dog'" supposed to be things the researching protagnist was saying out loud to the mensa person as he was tearing through the books? If so, I would put them in quotes to help the feeble minded like myself. If not, call me an amateur and disregard my thoughts.

Posted 16 Years Ago


lmfao I think I get it... which either means I'm crazy or you and I both are..lol i love it... i think its a great nonsensical poem.. almost like our conversations heheheeee

Posted 16 Years Ago


I certainly didn't understand it....you've baffled me...lol. I think you've succeeded in the nonsensical contest arena. I think I might try one for that contest as well. what a fun idea to write something nonsensical. It makes me think of Jabberwocky.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Albert Freeman
Albert Freeman

raymond, MS



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I'm one of 5 boys born to my mother and father. My dad served 23 years in the Army. I served 6 years in the Air Force and enjoyed traveling to Korea, Japan, and Maryland while in. My interests vary, b.. more..

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