Ode To You

Ode To You

A Poem by Albert Freeman
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Ode To You

 

I remember the first time I placed my hand in yours

I remember the first time I held you close to me

I remember the first time I saw your smile up close

I remember it all

 

I remember the feel of my hands running gently through your hair

I remember the way you looked as I drew you close for that

first tender kiss

I remember what it felt like to be spellbound by your taste

I remember it all

 

I remember the sparkle of your eyes and the desire

that flared from within

I remember the wonder of the moment and knowledge that

this was meant to be

I remember the sparks that flared from this knowledge

I remember it all

 

I remember the feeling of knowing I love you

I remember it clearly when you returned my love

I remember my thoughts and the happiness that shouted joy from within

I remember it all

I always will

© 2008 Albert Freeman


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Albert Freeman
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wow this takes me back to my first kiss with the girl i will always love but probably never see again, it went well until i tried the tongue and ended up licking her cheek as she had moved her head to get a breathe, it was so embarising, but it was the way you described it, awsome use of words and imagery!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you always touch my heart with your poetry, I love this showing of your feelings and share them completely. I often drift thru my memories of time spent with you, but more importantly I look forward to making more memories with you in the future. xxx Love You Always xxx

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Albert Freeman
Albert Freeman

raymond, MS



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I'm one of 5 boys born to my mother and father. My dad served 23 years in the Army. I served 6 years in the Air Force and enjoyed traveling to Korea, Japan, and Maryland while in. My interests vary, b.. more..

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