I'm a deadly sinner

I'm a sinner

I'm a deadly sinner
I came straight from Hell
You told me lies and I showed you the real life.
As it rained flames all my pain was going down the drain.
I'm not the girl you love
I flew away into the sky like a dove, you drove me away.
I'm tired of feeling your pain
I'm a deadly sinner and your just a ghost fading away into the darkness.
Let me be!
I'm tired of hearing your lies
I'm dying slowly
Just keep crying.
When you die, I'll see you in Hell.

Author's Note

I came straight from Hell.

Reviews

[ValyrieKiennan]

Emotional piece. I feel that there is some semblance of rhyming going on here, but it is complicated by the fact that there are no line breaks where they might be. I think structurally it could do with some tweaking, but overall, lovely.