Not Death Can Tear Us Apart

when his lover suicides, he decides to do the same days later.

i tried to fly but you cut my wings.

i tried to cry but you ignored the pleads.

i tried to deny all these awful things

i tried to believe it was all a dream.

i tried to fight but i lost that night.

maybe they were right, maybe i wasn't meant for this life.

as doubt filled my head, i remember thinking you were dead.

No. No, this couldn't be, you were always right here..

teasing me.

standing in the breeze wondering if you could hear the trees.

wondering if you could smell the fields, wishing you could be here.

now taking your place, i can hear my pulse race.

Reviews

[Brandon Wernke]

Very sad, but well writen.

[Alice]

Thank you very much

[FIN]

This is beautiful. A lost kinship captured well.

The bond.
The love.
The friendship.

And of course, the loss of.

Thank you for sharing.

[Alice]

Thank you for reviewing. I had recently lost one of the most amazing people in my life but I can show her the beauty of the world through my eyes.

[FIN]

It pains me to read that; but I am glad that you are holding on with your heart! And expressing yourself.

[Alice]

Thank you very much

[Lord of mad men]

This brings to mind a lot of emotions. It bring longing, love,lust,confusion, peace,and more. This is nicely written. Yours truely a mad lord

[Karmee]

suspenseful read, nicely written as well.

[Alice]

thank you so much :D

[Dysphoria]

This is a very, very sad poem, Alice. It nearly made me teary, which means it's a very good poem. Keep up the good work! I can't wait to read more.

[Alice]

thank you i appreciate it!