What Else Can You Do?

What Else Can You Do?

A Poem by Amalie

I tried my hardest
But my best was not enough
I tried to hard and now he’s gone
My life the ending to a bad love song
But I’d play that sad song all night long

If it reminded me of you

Doing all you can, can be the worst thing to do
Now my heart’s in two
And I’m farther and farther away from you

I flip on the radio
And start singing the blues
Because when you’ve done all you can
What else can you do?
 

© 2009 Amalie


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Wow.. such sadness but you should be saluted for doing all you could do!!! This is painful when we do and be all we can be and it is not enough.. sometimes in relationships there are voids or needs we can not meet with our partners that can not be met.. especially if they do not love themselves or know how to work a relationship.. this is not something we can do for them.. there are many other things as well. Relationships take work and it's a chemistry where you need to find a suitable match.. it is a two-way street and both are responsible for making it work.. if it doesn't ... we do feel sadly but then have to pick ourselves up.. be strong and when ready try again! I could feel the agony through your writing of this not working out.. I hope you find your match or soulmate some day!!! =)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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aw, this is sad, but i really like it. its very passionate, though its sad. its really good, love it

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow.. such sadness but you should be saluted for doing all you could do!!! This is painful when we do and be all we can be and it is not enough.. sometimes in relationships there are voids or needs we can not meet with our partners that can not be met.. especially if they do not love themselves or know how to work a relationship.. this is not something we can do for them.. there are many other things as well. Relationships take work and it's a chemistry where you need to find a suitable match.. it is a two-way street and both are responsible for making it work.. if it doesn't ... we do feel sadly but then have to pick ourselves up.. be strong and when ready try again! I could feel the agony through your writing of this not working out.. I hope you find your match or soulmate some day!!! =)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is something we all go through in relationships. The longing, the hope, then the broken heart. You depicted those feelings quite beautifully. I think you are a wonderful writer. Kudos

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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