Insane

With crys of pain,

the once innocent,

fell to shame,

and walked the path,

no sane man could tame,

and as they walked,

more came to follow,

cutting into life,

until all hearts were hollow,

and at the end,

they all lost there life,

for the truly insane,

came at them,

with a very sharp knife..

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Sharp, clever and relevant, a loving piece.

[Jake]

Nice rhyme, good structure and very emotive and descriptive. Great piece.