The Other Side

The Other Side

A Poem by Andrea Vargas

 

Theres a boy and

On the other side,

Theres a girl.

 

Both made a commitment,

but both have made dents,

Some in many ways than more,

but in all regards,

Both chose to shut that door.

 

Each believed the lies and dug for truths,

Which ended in many sighs and a reconcile booth.

 

Now the two each held there pride,

Which only leads to more arguments of the souls that died.

 

The balance is lost and therefore its the key,

But there's a boy and

On the other side,

Theres a girl,

Who most likely cant see.

 

Both made a commitment,

but both have made dents,

Some in many ways than more,

but in all regards,

Both chose to shut that door.

 

Woman are a mystery and Men are of pride,

Some go to boast as others rather cry.

 

These two are different to the extent that they see,

that there partner is unbearable,

 so close your eyes and count to three.

 

One.

Two.

Three.

 

But still there's a boy and

On the other side,

Theres a girl.

 

Without the two the world would be cast away,

as it is the two shall make each
others day.

© 2012 Andrea Vargas


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Your writes are good...Pen on./..:).............

Posted 5 Years Ago


please post more soon

Posted 5 Years Ago


Great writing, awesome imagery

Posted 5 Years Ago


interesting read....It surely would be the end if there were no boys or girls...You need to alter the spelling of THERE..in Now the two each held THEIR pride....and WOMAN are a mystery should be WOMEN...Small things I know...But it makes a difference....I too thought of this as a song

Posted 5 Years Ago


Seems to be formatted as a song...in the lines of this work...the repeating stanza...as this unfolds of the boy and girl in the story line...and you switch the mood in these lines:

Woman are a mystery and Men are of pride,
Some go to boast as others rather cry.

Posted 5 Years Ago


You have made a great game of a boy and a girl who make the world together a reality.
Very sweet piece.
Very lovely thoughts.
A great message for the people who believe lies and take pride as well.

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Andrea Vargas
Andrea Vargas

Ontario, CA



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I have been apart of this site for awhile and have written of romance and pain and many other different genres.. and i have come across many fantastic poets. Poetry has taught me so much, it has h.. more..

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