Let Me Add A 'Lil Fuel To Your Fire Baby

Let Me Add A 'Lil Fuel To Your Fire Baby

A Poem by ♥ Courtney ♥
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pyro moment >:-)

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The flames that are your hands
Lick at my skin so deliciously 
The warmth of your hot skin searing 
Right 
Through 
Mine 
Is maddening. 

 Let me be your fuel

The ether that is my skin 
Will burst you into my own fire 
As our mouths collide 
The arsenic in my lips 
And the fire on your tongue 
Will bring the city to ruins 
In our own 
Personal 
E X P L O S I O N 

Let me be your accelerant 

The acetone on my fingertips 
Will light a fiery trail 
Right down your body 
As I lightly trace my initials 
Into 
Your 
Skin 

We'll create our own little cocktail 
Of Gasoline 
Kerosene 
And we'll bring the whole world 
To its knees 
And with our burning passion and desire... 
We will set the whole world on fire...

© 2012 ♥ Courtney ♥


Author's Note

♥ Courtney ♥
bad.. i know

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Wow, This is interesting, because of the many different interpretations it could have. I see meaning on multiple levels and with different purposes. Fire, and fuel as a symbol of passion, and at the same time the literal connotation of fire and fuel is great. The end brings about thoughts of appocolypse. Or the end could mean the intentions that the sexual relationship will be the end of the world for others. I like it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Not bad at all, we are our own worst critics. I would describe more as Delicious. Like fire im starving for more, fire's appetite for fuel is never quenched !

Posted 10 Years Ago


♥ Courtney ♥

10 Years Ago

:) thank you :)
It isn't bad there is a lot of good imagery and I like how much emotion that you put into it and your writing style

Posted 10 Years Ago


Erotic and energetic, I love your poetry! Very modern and hip (not that I'd know what's hip). Enjoyed it, wild ride.

Posted 10 Years Ago


outstanding...i love the way you used words like gasoline and kerosene


Posted 10 Years Ago


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I really hope you review is sarcasm. Or i am bad at rating stuff. BRILLIANT :O

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wow what a wonderfuly powerful poem;rating high and enjoy your day.
Eddy.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Excellent, well u set my brain on fire with this read...poetic fiendfyre and lyrical nitroglycerine. Positively entertained. Good job

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow that is incredibly hot! (Pun not intended) I can feel the flames licking at my flesh!

Posted 11 Years Ago


the relation you have given to a fire that is raging and a woman...it is interesting and involving...don't get to think it is bad...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


nice....it cool...
make everyone fly...good job.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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♥ Courtney ♥
♥ Courtney ♥

Raccoon City , CA



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