Southern Bliss

Southern Bliss

A Poem by JenniferMarie

Blue sea of Bonnets 
In fields where we lay laughing 
Here I do belong 

© 2012 JenniferMarie


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I like these Haiku, especially the second one. The first two lines has some great organic imagery. I think that you could use a long dash after the words night in line two. I think that it would set up a dramatic pause and emphasize the cause and effect in the poem. Well done!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JenniferMarie

8 Years Ago

Good point. I will think about that. Thank you for your review.



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What a lovely feeling from capturing your favorite moments!
Adorable write:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JenniferMarie

6 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and reviewing Manal. I appreciate it very much.
Amen. So simple, and the simplicity seriously needs nothing more. If only everyone could experience the beauty of Texas... Its sunsets, wildlife, and bluebonnet fields. U just live my Texas :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


JenniferMarie

7 Years Ago

Thank you Melissa. I so agree. Sometimes I even get caught up in wanting to go to Europe or somewher.. read more
This was very well put:) short and to the point.

Posted 7 Years Ago


JenniferMarie

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your comment. I truly appreciate it. Happy holidays to you all ! :)
It is a package of double Haiku.
Both are wonderful.
Would be the best if served singly.
But the poet best knew her intention behind this.
Enjoyed reading.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

7 Years Ago

Thanks for the realization.
Too many good foods at the same dinner may affect the prize for in.. read more
JenniferMarie

7 Years Ago

I agree. I will post the others too soon. Have a great day. I hope we are all inspired today! :)
zainul

7 Years Ago

Best luck!
Nice.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JenniferMarie

8 Years Ago

Thank you.
Sami Khalil

8 Years Ago

You are welcome.
I like these Haiku, especially the second one. The first two lines has some great organic imagery. I think that you could use a long dash after the words night in line two. I think that it would set up a dramatic pause and emphasize the cause and effect in the poem. Well done!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JenniferMarie

8 Years Ago

Good point. I will think about that. Thank you for your review.
Nice...this sounds like a romantic start to a wonderful story.......

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JenniferMarie

8 Years Ago

It may be :) tbc
A pretty place to be and a beautiful
poem to see .
The image is nostalgic bringing home
memories of childhood.
---- John

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JenniferMarie

8 Years Ago

I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for the review.
Outstanding examples of modern haiku!
Lovely, Jennifer, and endearing--indeed, enchanting!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JenniferMarie

8 Years Ago

Thank you Frank. :)
Beautifully captured images your words convey.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JenniferMarie

8 Years Ago

Thank you.

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