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Southern Bliss

Southern Bliss

A Poem by JenniferMarie

Blue sea of Bonnets 
In fields where we lay laughing 
Here I do belong 

© 2012 JenniferMarie


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I like these Haiku, especially the second one. The first two lines has some great organic imagery. I think that you could use a long dash after the words night in line two. I think that it would set up a dramatic pause and emphasize the cause and effect in the poem. Well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JenniferMarie

11 Years Ago

Good point. I will think about that. Thank you for your review.



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What a lovely feeling from capturing your favorite moments!
Adorable write:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JenniferMarie

9 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and reviewing Manal. I appreciate it very much.
Amen. So simple, and the simplicity seriously needs nothing more. If only everyone could experience the beauty of Texas... Its sunsets, wildlife, and bluebonnet fields. U just live my Texas :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


JenniferMarie

11 Years Ago

Thank you Melissa. I so agree. Sometimes I even get caught up in wanting to go to Europe or somewher.. read more
This was very well put:) short and to the point.

Posted 11 Years Ago


JenniferMarie

11 Years Ago

Thank you for your comment. I truly appreciate it. Happy holidays to you all ! :)
It is a package of double Haiku.
Both are wonderful.
Would be the best if served singly.
But the poet best knew her intention behind this.
Enjoyed reading.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the realization.
Too many good foods at the same dinner may affect the prize for in.. read more
JenniferMarie

11 Years Ago

I agree. I will post the others too soon. Have a great day. I hope we are all inspired today! :)
zainul

11 Years Ago

Best luck!
Nice.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JenniferMarie

11 Years Ago

Thank you.
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome.
I like these Haiku, especially the second one. The first two lines has some great organic imagery. I think that you could use a long dash after the words night in line two. I think that it would set up a dramatic pause and emphasize the cause and effect in the poem. Well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JenniferMarie

11 Years Ago

Good point. I will think about that. Thank you for your review.
Nice...this sounds like a romantic start to a wonderful story.......

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JenniferMarie

11 Years Ago

It may be :) tbc
A pretty place to be and a beautiful
poem to see .
The image is nostalgic bringing home
memories of childhood.
---- John

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JenniferMarie

11 Years Ago

I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for the review.
Outstanding examples of modern haiku!
Lovely, Jennifer, and endearing--indeed, enchanting!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JenniferMarie

11 Years Ago

Thank you Frank. :)
Beautifully captured images your words convey.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JenniferMarie

11 Years Ago

Thank you.

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