The Sunset Keeper

The Sunset Keeper

A Poem by Andrea Vargas

Fierce winds,

and acid field rain,

envelope me in a feeling of pain,

and shroud me in darkness,

in this chaotic mess,

watching as my heart pours out of my chest,

then with a swift hand,

they clutch my soul,

and drag me down to the world below,

and along the way,

I see such fiery hate and endless pain,

it torments my mind,

as i struggle to stay sane,

and as the feeling grows deeper,

I search for my sunset keeper,

who knows me well,

and can pull me out,

of this endless firey hell.

© 2011 Andrea Vargas


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Very good read. I also like the use of hope at the end. Good job:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


This was amazing Andrea.
I search for my sunset keeper,

who knows me well,

and can pull me out,

of this endless firey hell.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nice work Andrea, with a little hope at the end which is always nice...I loved the title

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Andrea Vargas
Andrea Vargas

Ontario, CA



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I have been apart of this site for awhile and have written of romance and pain and many other different genres.. and i have come across many fantastic poets. Poetry has taught me so much, it has h.. more..

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