Andrew, this poem made me smile. You use form and structure to carry the reader through the poem, and I loved the line "the female protagonist would be your understudy." :) Keep putting your words on the page, my friend, and you'll always have a reader in me. Writing seems to come easily to you, and I hope that you thank your Muse (whoever he or she is) for kindling the spark of inspiration. It works!
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Literally the best thing I've heard all day. Thank you very much David, I really do appreciate it an.. read moreLiterally the best thing I've heard all day. Thank you very much David, I really do appreciate it and I am glad you found it so enjoyable. Maybe I'll be a published poet one day haha.
8 Years Ago
Well, you should be! Consider self-publishing. I'd buy a copy!
Thank you so much! You are really helping me out and I am so thankful! Honest, I really appreciate i.. read moreThank you so much! You are really helping me out and I am so thankful! Honest, I really appreciate it.
Andrew, this poem made me smile. You use form and structure to carry the reader through the poem, and I loved the line "the female protagonist would be your understudy." :) Keep putting your words on the page, my friend, and you'll always have a reader in me. Writing seems to come easily to you, and I hope that you thank your Muse (whoever he or she is) for kindling the spark of inspiration. It works!
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Literally the best thing I've heard all day. Thank you very much David, I really do appreciate it an.. read moreLiterally the best thing I've heard all day. Thank you very much David, I really do appreciate it and I am glad you found it so enjoyable. Maybe I'll be a published poet one day haha.
8 Years Ago
Well, you should be! Consider self-publishing. I'd buy a copy!
Thank you so much! You are really helping me out and I am so thankful! Honest, I really appreciate i.. read moreThank you so much! You are really helping me out and I am so thankful! Honest, I really appreciate it.
An engaging piece capturing a very relatable circumstance. "The female protagonist would be your understudy. You are already the main character in another series" Really loved these lines.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thanks. :) I'm glad you enjoyed the piece, hope you like my other work as well.
My name is Andrew Rayne, I'm 22 years old.
I always try to be more than what I am, and compete with myself more than others. Built on a foundation of concepts that forced me to struggle, and continu.. more..