Love: A Novel Made with Sticky Notes

Love: A Novel Made with Sticky Notes

A Poem by Andrew Rayne
"

Never be afraid when someone writes your name so you love the way it sounds.

"
She had to be scared.
The only lips she knows
are the ones that curl when they lie.
She has read more unhappy endings
than the pages of the love novel she never 
had the chance to finish.
It was called, "A Happily Ever After"
and the only time she ever acted happy was after
she had cried enough tears 
to stop the drought in California.
Now I'm not an author,
I don't have a novel,
and writers block is my best friend;
but if I did write a book,
I would color it with characters with the same eyes as yours:
Strong, proud and lonely.
I would make a plot line filled with every way
I hope to one day love you.
More importantly,
the female protagonist would be your understudy.
You are already the main character in another series,
and everyone loves her.
I love her too.
I know,
it's scary because the only love you have ever known
were just a bunch of short stories and plot twists.
I think I'm just the "P.S. I love you." 
on the back of the sticky note.
The kind of guy that doesn't say a word,
and I know that scares you the most.

© 2015 Andrew Rayne


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Andrew, this poem made me smile. You use form and structure to carry the reader through the poem, and I loved the line "the female protagonist would be your understudy." :) Keep putting your words on the page, my friend, and you'll always have a reader in me. Writing seems to come easily to you, and I hope that you thank your Muse (whoever he or she is) for kindling the spark of inspiration. It works!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Andrew Rayne

8 Years Ago

I shall. Thank you very much!
David Berger

8 Years Ago

I've liked your FB page and will share it, too.
Andrew Rayne

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much! You are really helping me out and I am so thankful! Honest, I really appreciate i.. read more



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Andrew, this poem made me smile. You use form and structure to carry the reader through the poem, and I loved the line "the female protagonist would be your understudy." :) Keep putting your words on the page, my friend, and you'll always have a reader in me. Writing seems to come easily to you, and I hope that you thank your Muse (whoever he or she is) for kindling the spark of inspiration. It works!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Andrew Rayne

8 Years Ago

I shall. Thank you very much!
David Berger

8 Years Ago

I've liked your FB page and will share it, too.
Andrew Rayne

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much! You are really helping me out and I am so thankful! Honest, I really appreciate i.. read more
An engaging piece capturing a very relatable circumstance. "The female protagonist would be your understudy. You are already the main character in another series" Really loved these lines.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Andrew Rayne

8 Years Ago

Thanks. :) I'm glad you enjoyed the piece, hope you like my other work as well.

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Andrew Rayne
Andrew Rayne

Tucson, AZ



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My name is Andrew Rayne, I'm 22 years old. I always try to be more than what I am, and compete with myself more than others. Built on a foundation of concepts that forced me to struggle, and continu.. more..

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