Get rid of it!!!

Get rid of it!!!

A Poem by Angel Bird

 

   - Rid of Greed

   - World is Freed

   - Now at Ease

   - World in Peace

© 2009 Angel Bird


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So succinct you could almost miss it. - I had to go back at read it again, as I started it expecting to be reading for longer : ) Yet it says all it needs to say, really needs no addition.

I also think that the use of the hyphens, and a good sized font, adds to the tone of the poem, and helps emphasize the simple, yet as someone else said powerful thoughts.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I do think you are right, greed is the biggest problem in the world, without greed, there would be no need for war or profits, no need for fighting or destruction of the environment.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is simple and straight to the point

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

- Released from Burden

The world is but one country and Mankind, its Citizens.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Okay this did make me think. I like it! Thanks for entering! I will be happy to explain your rating if needed.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Ry
Short and sweet and simple.
But you said all you needed to say =)
Perfect balance of brevity and strength.
Great job!
-Eli

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ahhhhhh yes, straight and to the point, I love it! and yes, the world would be a better place. A very powerful poem, says a lot.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ahhh... yes. it is that simple, i think...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So succinct you could almost miss it. - I had to go back at read it again, as I started it expecting to be reading for longer : ) Yet it says all it needs to say, really needs no addition.

I also think that the use of the hyphens, and a good sized font, adds to the tone of the poem, and helps emphasize the simple, yet as someone else said powerful thoughts.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very interesting. Only four lines long, this poem is short yet powerful. It's simple and to the point. Each word really packs a punch. Nice work!

-Howl

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wonderful ..in just a few lines..you capture the whole of a wonderful thought , you are very talented

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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