To be with you...

 

 

To be with you,
just here,
I will become the wind,
I will lull you to the sleep,
I will be a dew drop
which will awaken you at dawn,

I will be a fire
which will light your live...
I will be everything what you want,
Tree, meadow, flower,
I can be for you,
All your world.

Even  more than once you suffered,
Even  more than once I hurt,
I will stay now with you...
If you want me to be.

Reviews

[EILEEN McGUINNESS]

What a pleasant thought to be with the lover in a dream or in real life is evocative your sensual words and photo evoke memories of a sweet passionate embrace spending time with the one who creates that magical electricity between two soulmates,did you have anyone in mind or is there a special guy in your life right now? just curious i wondered if it was a dedication.

[hoyt]

so beautiful, and tenderly passionate. In few words, so much is spoken, and felt!
wonderful write...:-)

[Kenny L. Mitchell]

I would LOVE to meet that type of love. It encourages, hopes and believes all things. Love never fails. Beautiful words. They touch my heart. Simply beautiful.

[Mark]

Beautiful, in a way, yet at the same time sad. I was drawn to her plaintive pleas, "I will be...a dew drop...a fire...evrything...for you..." It saddens me to see one so young as yourself, already ready to cast her true identity away, and shape herself into something else, to ensnare a man: not genuine to him, not honoring to her--a lose-lose scenario! Nevertheless, the poem, AS a poem, is a delight. The need for love is the strongest motivator in any human action you can name, and she (you) evokes it beautifully, sweetly, from the heart. Thank you.

[Q'ANIL]

okay now why have i only just found your poetry???

...a beautiful work straight from the heart...it strikes at the heart in some forms and yet the words you have used brightens the heart too...

"I will stay now with you...
if you want me to be."
Beautiful...you are indeed a master of the written word...and I'm not just saying that...
take care
~CJM

[Twilight]

Romantic, complex and involving for the reader. This was genuinely an interesting read! Your use of imagery is apt, though not exceptional in any way. I wonder what inspired you to write this, if you don't mind me asking? A dream, or real-life experience, perhaps?

[Just Manoosh]

So very very beautiful.

I hope that this plea was heard........ it deserves to be.

Mx

[Arthur Crow]

What beautiful word weaving that gently floats and enchants the senses.. I was left feeling warmed
and peaceful after reading this little gem.

[MalkavianDelirium]

I really like this. The imagery is wonderful and evocative, all-encompassing and poignant. Very elemental and beautiful