What If's

Coming in strides
 to sit beside
What Ifs way side, today.
 
To steal the pride,
 and hike a ride with,
our divided confidence.

Gone is the day,
 one can truly say,
the way they really feel.

Because today,
 is quite the steal,
by What ifs unreal fate.

Reviews

[Jeremy Baker]

This is great! To take a universal question we all ask and make an almost living entity gives this both simplicity and power. Great writing!

[Ruth]

A different slant on what if..have to say..I am liking your style love :) xx

[AnnaMariaQQss]

Indeed I did, Thanks a ton for the correction and heads up. Hugs, AnnaMaria

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Love the last stanza, I think you meant quite instead of quit. I got the message though. This is amazing, Love it so much....keep wriitng always. You are gifted.