rhythms

rhythms

A Poem by TamiViolet
"

Tis what Tis, folks...

"


Life continues to unfold as she discovers herself with each alluring indigo sunset and seductive dawn, blushing sometimes...


In modesty she unravels kindness and gentility that chaos dare not destroy...


For her strength reigns...


'If I were another persona, who would become me?'  --a passionate red rose coveted with prickly thorns of yesterday...  She welcomes them...


Unafraid...


She is violet...blue...pink...aquamarine...peridot...


Iridescent,


especially on Sunday...



She
is Venus and Aphrodite, the epitome of love and beauty although some walk away from her depth and light with distorted wire rim glasses and ill-fated perceptions...

Now, she sighs a happy sigh, bidding auf wiedersehen as the Heavens reach down and kiss her subtle pink lips with gratitude...making their offer...

She sips java in a room adorned with heroic crystal chandeliers and silken white drapes and linens where she and her new lover share chocolate truffles and plump strawberries with cream, yet she knows if he should banish into the foggy London night during midsummer...

she
will
ascend...

even after Death...




© 2012 TamiViolet


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"She is Venus and Aphrodite, the epitome of love and beauty although some have walked away from her depth and light with distorted wire rim glasses and ill-fated perceptions..."
My favorite bit :)
You've really succeeded in creating a character here, a mystical and romantic character that plays with the reader senses.
Well done :)
x

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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This is an exquisite expression of a life.. of a woman who transcends time and reaches deep into our psyche... Such beautiful colors and emotion bring her to life... May she ever sip and smile...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Some women just trancend reality as here

Posted 13 Years Ago


"She is Venus and Aphrodite, the epitome of love and beauty although some have walked away from her depth and light with distorted wire rim glasses and ill-fated perceptions..."
My favorite bit :)
You've really succeeded in creating a character here, a mystical and romantic character that plays with the reader senses.
Well done :)
x

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

truly beautiful!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love your genius

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a beautiful piece. I enjoyed reading it, it had a classical feel to it, especially the photo. Beautiful!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Stunning~ and wonderful to see you back.........this was delicious!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A most romantic and colorful piece.....soo beautifully expressed in poetic verse filled with vivid and vibrant descriptions~ am lovin' this one

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Stunning love! The battle of ascension is seldom versed so poignantly! Wonderfully vivid, as always with your work! xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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