Guns = Danger

I was looking into the sun when

I spotted a gun

It was shining bright in the sunlight

I was going to  pick it up

I was going to have a look

Then I remembered something I

Read in a book

Kids don't play with guns

Though it seems quite fun

You should not pick

Up a gun it can

Spoil all your fun

And they may bury you tomorrow

Author's Note

Kids should not play with weapons of any kind.

Reviews

[Fairytale]

Great poem. Lightly written, yet had a strong theme. Great writing style. The rhyming was done in an original way. Also, great imagery in the first two sentences. This got my attention right away, which is very important in any piece of writing.

[jennifer little]

this is a wonderful poem and noone should ever play with any kind of wepons it just causes pain and missory thanks for sharing this wondefull poem with me

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I like this rhyming poem ! And you sure have said so much no one should play with guns or weapons - your poems and stories have good lessons ... !