You're Fault

This is my outlet. What I write may be totally crappy but it helps to make me feel a little better. Sorry if you don't like it.

How can you say you’ve done nothing wrong?

You say I’m weak, so I try to be strong.

This constant pain I feel?

May not be physical but it’s certainly real

You’ve changed me,

In ways I can’t explain

But what I do know is that

You’ve made me what I am today.

Cold, hollow, always alone

That’s how I feel now

and it’s all your fault

Reviews

[Perkele.7885]

Pain is real if you feel it, I do not have to feel it as well to believe it!
The placement and acceptance of blame will go along way in helping
to relieve it, and learning to forgive will also help ease what is left
after you have gained control of it.

[KanaDream]

It's really annoying when people can hurt you and twist you around and beat you into emptiness and then they deny being at fault. I like this poem because it has truth in it. It also flows well. Good job. ^^

And the person at fault doesn't deserve the great poet you are.

Keep Dreaming.

[Aurora Masquerade]

Thank you for this review. It hasn't happened much but when they do, they make me happy. So thank you for taking the time to write a meaningful review, they mean a lot to me.