Second Chance

Second Chance

A Poem by Pen The Willows

I'm feeling lonely
I'm feeling unwanted
This is how I feel
I'm feeling haunted
 
Roses are red
Violets are blue
Friendships can die
In the blink of an eye
 
There they are
Standing in a row
I'm over here
Is it my time to go?
 
How I wish
I could stay
Here with them
Another day
 
But I can't
I'm being replaced
Please let her
Be two-faced
 
My turn is over
My second chance done
Even though it feels
Like it has just begun

© 2010 Pen The Willows


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Again, I would caution you to watch your format. Several times I noticed your rhyme scheme changing without a reason. Other than that, this is an excellent piece.

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Added on November 29, 2009
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I'm 18 years old and I'm in my sophomore year of college. Most of the writings archived on here are from when I was in middle school and high school, and they aren't really very good. I wasn't going t.. more..

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