With 'YOU'....

With 'YOU'....

A Poem by Basu Gupta
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Fingers crossed..!!

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With you I enjoy my suffocating mediocrity,
With you I love me and my impulsive stupidity..
With you I can resist those evil temptations,
With you I fail to reciprocate other's attention..

Maybe I'd be the one in an endless queue,
All of us waiting and wanting you
Some can even give you another heart,
Some can fly you through those beautiful stars....

I don't think I do afford that all
But I'm sure I'll always catch you fall
I even won't make you fly through stars
I fear if moon just keep you as one of his star..

Changes would be enormous when you'd be with me
Starting with the one I badly want you to see,
Right now my destiny is monitoring my life
With you I can write by my own with full rights..

Every page of that book will start with you
Ending with the line I'm still in love with you..
Middle part would be the things we have done,
Accompanying with carefree and frivolous fun..

So would you be mine in this life so small
So that I can enjoy even with it's challenging falls
I won't ever lie and make you cry
Please say 'yes' and atleast give me a try..

Written By - BASU GUPTA

© 2013 Basu Gupta



Author's Note

Basu Gupta
everyone feels for their first crush,first love..they do not know why they feel special with them,why their tease and taunts are felt appreciation..and why their heart-beat increases even when they see their beloved initials somewhere....
Maybe this is called 'LoVe'..
I tried to figure and pen down some of the things for such..
Hope you all like it..

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this is a wonderful lyrical write. you expressed that longing so well.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Basu Gupta

3 Years Ago

Thank you..I appreciate your feedback
You are very talented!! What a great poem! I wish I could express my feelings like that

Posted 3 Years Ago


Basu Gupta

3 Years Ago

You can express..even better than me..
thanks for stopping by
Carolina Constante

3 Years Ago

your welcome :)
This is truly beautiful.Pleading with the one you love to give you a chance even though what you think you are is not enough :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Basu Gupta

3 Years Ago

Thankew for such an overwhelming review..
thanks for visiting
Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

You are very welcome Basu :)
This is incredible, you truly are talented, I love the idea of the love, this relationship. the last line was powerful, "please say "yes" and atleast give me a try.."
almost a desperate plea, but ... I don't know, the emotion and creative heartfelt words you've used... definitely drew me in, I love every bit!
great piece!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Basu Gupta

3 Years Ago

That was really inspiring..
made me feel proud n egoistic heheh..
Jokes apart I'm just t.. read more
Bowers

3 Years Ago

your are very welcome, I appreciate your sharing :D
How lovely and absolutely inspired! I was just surfing around and realized that I'd not read your work in a long time. I'm glad I came across this even though you posted it some time ago. Sometimes I'm a silly incurable romantic and this really moves me. Not soon to be forgotten.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Basu Gupta

3 Years Ago

Thanks a tonn jennie...
Glad you liked it
Thanks for stopping by
keep powerful poems coming
very well penned and structured
thanks for sharing once again

Posted 3 Years Ago


Basu Gupta

3 Years Ago

Thank you mbuyisa
interesting take on love I like the untraditional way you express yourself

Posted 3 Years Ago


Basu Gupta

3 Years Ago

Thank You abdul
Be brave and go for it like your poem :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Beautiful. I truly could feel the desperation and yearning of this piece, and the will posessed to fight for a love of such rarity. Loved this staza most...

"Every page of that book will start with you
Ending with the line I'm still in love with you..
Middle part would be the things we have done,
Accompanying with carefree and frivolous fun.."


Posted 3 Years Ago


Basu Gupta

3 Years Ago

thanks for reading...glad you liked it
Ah, young love....nothing quite like it. The openess and honesty, the feeling of invincibility, the innocence and the passion. Absolutely lovely. Lydi**

Posted 3 Years Ago


Basu Gupta

3 Years Ago

thanks a tonnnn ma'am

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Basu Gupta
Basu Gupta

Agra, Agra, India



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