Even More

Heartbreak can be confusing.

I'm living in a nightmare,
with all my biggest fears,
I feel like I'm dying inside,
I've cried too many tears.

Reality hasn't kicked in,
it all seems like a dream,
I've been going crazy for you,
this makes me want to scream.

You were always there for me,
and I was there for you,
Laughing, crying, trying,
no matter where the wind blew.

Now I'm just confused,
More than ever before,
Because while this is happening,
I love you even more

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Love the proverbial...its give not taken...yet seems the other has found new interest and your're waiting in the wings...may be let it go and see if it comes back...or not...but in order to accept the change --- one must be able to move forward and accept the reality and not the stars...which are out of reach...

[Anika Morris]

Very deep, my style of poem. I love it, i felt the emotions in it too. Great Poem. Constructed well