Midnight Serenade

Midnight Serenade

A Poem by Beautifully Tragic xPoetry Queen
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not sure about the title. but its a bit different than usual for me.

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Playing a midnight serenade

In this starry moonlit night

So black as my heart

As it aches for you tonight

 

Playing so softly

As I'm wishing for you near

Hoping to hear your sweet words

Whispering tenderly in my ear

 

I once knew the light

Being close to you

Now while everyone sleeps

I'm awake in the darkest blue.

 

You are my ghost, living within me

In the silence of the mist

Lingering in my mind and heart

The only place where you now exist.

 

Playing this sad tune,

The harmonic sorrow of my heart

I wait, and play only for you

For death we do depart.


© 2008 Beautifully Tragic xPoetry Queen



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Very vivid and I can feel the sorrow and pain. The night adds to the mystery and feeling....
"Playing a midnight serenade
In this starry moonlit night
So black as my heart
As it aches for you tonight"
This goes so wonderfully with the picture as well.
A haunting aura exists around and inside your great poem!



Posted 9 Years Ago


5 of 5 people found this review constructive.




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wowww!!! awesome rhymes and cool deep sentences!!


Posted 8 Months Ago


Nicely done, the emotion comes through clearly.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Beautiful write. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

Posted 9 Years Ago


Thank you for sharing this piece with me, my heart melts with the sadness but longs for the inner peace and understand for the conclusionfor death we do depart

Posted 9 Years Ago


Marvelous and mournful~ such a heart rending poem that exudes the way life feels when we are alone.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Beautiful, that is the only thing I can say, beautiful. Right now I am holding back tears. I have never cried over poetry, but this peice really touched me in a way I have never felt before. I am not worthy! There are so many adjetives I could use to describe it but none of them would stand up to it's beauty and wisdom. I need to go get some tissues and pick up my jaw from the floor. Hands down fantastic!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Hey pretty good job...and a good pic to go along with it.

Dark yet a delightful read.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Dark as ever I see. This poem is perfect. Do not strike one word. I loved it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


You are amazing poet. Your words touches my soul.

Posted 9 Years Ago


If you can play as good as you write, I'd sure like to hear you play.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Beautifully Tragic xPoetry Queen
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Passionate kisses of a mind gone wild, NJ



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