Saturn

My favorite planet.

Goddess of the Universe,

Powerful among the rest.

Clouds of golden lustre

Encircle her clouded skies

A weightless mistress.

An enchantress of dreams

Lingering and revolving

Swimming in her sea

Of diamonds.

 

 

Reviews

[Balance]

a very good point of view on this planet. i am interested myself with this amazing planet. how much do you know about it?

[Valentine]

For some reason..I like this one..the diamonds part makes me stop and think of that ring around saturn and my finger..Valentine

[Sara Mercury]

Very nice. (Saturn is the ruling planet of one of my near-twin flames.) Cool ...

[Muse]

Very cool! And she wears the rings of adornment.

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beautiful personification of a amazing planet..my favourite too

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

exquisite~ detailed gorgeous imagery with feeling~

[LinBin]

beautiful x

[Coyote Poetry]

Saturn is a beautiful planet. Thank you for the strong words describing a amazing site to see. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Enigma]

I dont remember reading a poem about a planet before. Haha. But this poem is wonderfully written. Its short and beautiful, personifying the the planet> a pleasure to read. Well penned.

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

Very pretty :-)