My Lover, My Addiction

A love poem to my only true love.

She knows just how to please me,

Raining down her love upon me.

Kissing away the pain of a broken heart,

Wiping the tears from my swollen eyes.

 

She is like a drug, and I am addicted.

Looking for my fix, just one more hit.

Soaring in her words of agonizing extasy,

Of sexual sensations, almost overwhelming.

 

I am no longer in control,

Like a puppet on a string, she moves me.

Her own personal possession, a slave to her will

But I am bound to her by her freedom.

 

A sweet everlasting serenity,

Of created technicolor dreams

And passionate kisses of my imagination,

A mind gone wild in creativity.

 

She is my lover, my greatest addiction.

She is romance and darkness,

She is dreams and nightmares.

And I dare not escape her love.

 

Author's Note

In case you missed it, my true love is writing. :)

Reviews

[Dark Beauty]

Great write from beginning to end i was hooked,loved it!!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and positive poem of love. I like the positive feel of the words. We need to appreciate the people we love and desire.
"Her own personal possession, a slave to her will
But I am bound to her by her freedom."
I like the above line. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Science girl]

Great piece! Writing too, I'm sure like many on here, is my love. I was sucked in from the very beginning.

[Chris Taylor]

A great poem about the "addiction" of writing. It came be liberating and enslaving all at the same time. I felt you really conveyed your love for it in this poem well. I loved the line:"Her own personal possession, a slave to her will". Nice job and I can't wait to read more just like this poem.

God bless.

[Dayran]

Self love comes from realizing the depths of one's own and feeling that there isn't another like you to share it with. By our honesty we are compelled to say, I'm the best there is. However, in finding another, its a magic greater than self love, its life.

[Y.F.]

It's always good to be surrounded by people who care, even better when it's someone as special as you decribe. Not sure if it's someone you actually know, or just admire from afar, but one thing's for sure - keep her close to your heart.

[Ruth]

Grabs the attention and reels!
The ending to this is a slight twist that adds impact...this reaches such depths..awesome!
xx

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

This was positively sinful and romantic :-)

[Rene Velez]

Loving and intoxicating

[Dahlia Phoenix]

"A sweet everlasting serenity,
Of created technicolor dreams"

Amazing power and sexuality shown in this poem. To love is to want and to want is to need. I love these two lines because they are just original. Awesome!