Reasons

Reasons

A Poem by Brittany Evans


Life Gives Reasons to live.
Gives a place for hope, Love and joy.
Hopeless is the feeling of death.
The feeling of the new life ahead.
Hopelessness isn't an option when living life.
It has no power to give strength to the weak.
Love is the ultimate power.
It heals one,
It can strengthen the weak,
make the less fortunate be fortunate,
Can make life powerful in every way.
Hope is the power the hopeless seek.
Hope gives life reasons to be tough.
Joy makes the smile on faces real,
embraces life.
Fear makes life complete.
Without fear life would be tougher than it is today.
Fear is the biggest weakness,
destroying dreams, thoughts, feelings.
Fear makes us stronger.

© 2014 Brittany Evans



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Fear is a two- sided coin. Make us careful and plan better. Always better to know your goals or possible problems. The poem open the door to thoughts and a long conversation. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Explores the pathways of hope, love, and joy. I think you should divide it into several stanzas - one about hope, one about love, and one about joy. Just my opinion - I think it would be better that way. Keep writing!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I struggle with the message in this writing I found it to be confusing. Just the first declaration could be disputed and refuted but then the confusing aspect hit me when declaring the hopelessness of death as something negative. I am left confused. I think the desire was to divide and conquer to put on one side what seems useful worth living and on the other what you consider unhelpful but as it is I am just guessing.

I am left a little confounded

Thankyou

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Lovely poem. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Fear is a two- sided coin. Make us careful and plan better. Always better to know your goals or possible problems. The poem open the door to thoughts and a long conversation. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is really cheesy but I have more than a few "reasons" to like your poem. Very well written and very true.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brittany Evans

3 Years Ago

thank you so much

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