For Sabrina

Tryin' to be the change you wanted to see in me

Tryin' to hold on to every single memory

They say time can heal all pain

But I ain't letting time steal your name

Bad times and good intentions

Half hearted interventions

An angels smiles

fightin the devils trials

You opened my eyes when you closed yours for good

You gave me a lesson that nothing ever could

Love

Forgiveness

Beauty

You knew it all and knew it well

Maybe an early heaven was to save you from hell

My promise to you is to never forget

To always be better

and never regret

Happy Birthday Brina!

Reviews

[Gee]

Beeeeoooootifulllll. Weird how sometimes it takes the passing of a friend , relative to open our eyes to what life CAN or should be.
Right, I'm off to write something stoooooopid

[BBP]

Thank you!!! It is a shame that's what it takes sometimes but... guess that's the kinda shot that makes beauty outta everything!

[Gee]

Tis indeed my dear, dearest poet, Bev.
Thought I'd try out "dearest poet" .......Why do they write that ?? Hmmmmmmmmmm. Can't be doing with all of that flowery bollocks (I think that is a term oft' used in poetry...Oh and why we're at it " my muse" does nowt for me either.

[Octavia]

They say time can heal all pain
But I ain't letting time steal your name

That's my favorite line. Simple, but to the point. I can hear acoustic guitar setting this all to music. I can tell this piece is heartfelt. Lovely work.

[BBP]

Thank you Octavia! It was very heartfelt for me! Thank you for you sweet and kind words!

[Sinbulvinter]

i like this a lot. so heartfelt and gentle with beautiful words full of love!
also my daughters name is Sabrina too, so i like it for that as well haha

[BBP]

Thank you!!!!! It's my sisters name and means the world that you appreciated it! 🤗

[Sinbulvinter]

You're very welcome

[MsJewel]

There is strength and tenderness in your words, which make them feel real and heartfelt. A lovely dedication to someone who obviously was very special to you. Julie

[BBP]

Sorry I missed this! Thank you so very much it was a very soulful piece for me!

[Ana Papaya]

"Maybe an early heaven was to save you from hell"
That is a very powerful line. It's hard to understand 'why' sometimes, especially when the end comes to soon. Very heartfelt. Beautiful words Bev. xx

[BBP]

Thank you papaya! The why is never answered but we find peace in hope!

[Ana Papaya]

You're welcome. Yes, time is a wonderful healer.
(Or at least 'duller' of pain)

[Island Hippy]

This is very beautiful, writing like this seems to slap a person in the face with the depth of meaning. Izzy

[BBP]

Thank you again, it is a very special piece to me! Im glad it had impact.

Also, thanks for the Gardenia piece heads up.. I didnt realize i left it unpublished when I edited it today, I fixed that now,

Thanks again! :)

[Mr.Writer]

Creative piece... unique... You left a bit of a twist at the end... :)
Keep it up! :)

[BBP]

Thank you! I wrote it for my sister in her birthday as a tribute piece

[Mr.Writer]

Soo sweet! That's niceee!

[BBP]

Thank you so much!

[Mr.Writer]

:) Np, siblings relation is very strong

[BBP]

Very! Not even death can break it.

[mercy party]

With sincerity you always hit the reader hard.
The early heaven part made me pause and reflect on someone in a comforting way. A very wise and yes, tender dedication poem.

[BBP]

Thank you very much MP .. That means a lot to me because this write was very special to me!

I always appreciate you kind words!

[T0TS]

So cool, I have friend named Sabrina too! And I also call her Brina...lovely dedication that was heart felt. Write on, Bev.

[BBP]

Thank you! It was a rare glimpse inside my heart.

Thanks for reading

[T0TS]

And those are the best writes imho...you rocked it...take a bow. ;)

[Lorry]

Simply beautiful words. Perfect.

[BBP]

Thanks Lorry! It was a raw bit of emotion for me.