Your all I desire

Your all I desire

A Poem by Snickers
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I wrote this on a feeling I had, I wrote it for my soul mate. I hope it means to him as much as it means to me. He may get on my nerves, or make me upset, but I still love him.

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I want to feel your arms around my waist, your breath against my throat.
The warmth of your hugs, the softness in your kiss.
What I wouldn't do to have just one last touch.
A touch that would last forever and keep me smiling.
A touch of warmth is everything to desire.
A touch of softness is everything to a smile.
Your touch against my skin, your breath against my throat, is all I desire.
You murmuring soft words in my ear keeping me at bay, your all I ever wanted all I ever needed.
Your all I will desire

© 2010 Snickers



Author's Note

Snickers
Ignore spelling or grammar, this is written and based on the way I felt. I am in love and this is all I desired. This is a true poem, based on my love for him, that I will always feel. I hope this means as much to him as it means to me. I hope other people will have this feeling and won't ever loose it.

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I am so glad that someone can actually feel this way. Still so innocent. I thought I knew pain by the young age of 15; but I had really no idea! Love all you can whilst you can; before the pain gets you. Cos when the pain gets you, you will turn cold and bitter, and you will long for just one moment of innocence to return to you so that you can feel 'love' once again.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Love is grand and awesome. I am very happy you have been blessed with loves knowledge. And now, we the readers, get to share your glory and witness your glow.
Finely penned from the heart Poet Friend! Hugs, AnnaMaria

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love it. This is how I'm feeling lately, so I know exactly how you feel. Isn't it wonderful to be in love? (:

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful way of confessing feelings. I love it =)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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It's the sort anyone around my age scribbles in their diary and reads whenever they're in the extreme moods. Very nicely written.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very nice dream.
love the color coding

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I am so glad that someone can actually feel this way. Still so innocent. I thought I knew pain by the young age of 15; but I had really no idea! Love all you can whilst you can; before the pain gets you. Cos when the pain gets you, you will turn cold and bitter, and you will long for just one moment of innocence to return to you so that you can feel 'love' once again.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Lovely and sweet poem.


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it's a sweet poem...took me back to my distant youth...it has a distinctive teen feel to it...for instance, someone older might write "the warmth of your embrace"...young love is beautiful...lovely / heartfelt words :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

It's a really good poem... I feel like this now... Totally like thiz. The poem is great and I love the descriptions you give about his kiss and hugs and touch. (:

Posted 7 Years Ago


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(: I think we shall all feel this one day, and I thought I had. Wonderful poem darling.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Added on August 29, 2010
Last Updated on August 31, 2010
Tags: Love, Hugs, Kisses, breath, Desire

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