Siren

Song im working on probably going to suck :/ enjoy

Beauty,
Thy name is yours
Calling through the cracks
and pulling me in....
Your siren song is pulling me in
I can't resist,
the beauty of your voice

Though I know it will bring me to my demise

The fight is futile,

This siren's song is pulling me in

Standing in the glow of your magnificence

My heart pulling me closer,

And my soul screaming for mercy....

Those cries were not heard

Those cries were not heard....

I turn my back to embrace for my coming doom

Your soft voice becomes the demonic growls you hid so well

One final scream releases from your jaws

And gone...

Author's Note

Work in progress, Be honest in review

Reviews

[Colt 45 & 9/16]

Interesting consonant repetition! What does the music sound like. What instrument are used or what style is it played in!

[Jordan Avechuco]

I originally wrote this to be a heavier song, but I'm going to try with all types and see how it goes,