Sometimes I Wonder Why

Experimenting with a story in 60 words. :)

It's been years since the last time we were together; decades since the last time we talked. It's been centuries since I first started missing you; eons since I fell in love with you. And yet, you continue affecting me like we met yesterday, talked hours ago, missed each other for a minute and fell in love a second ago.

Author's Note

Just a experiment. Do review and tell me if I succeeded. :)

Reviews

[Helena]

Dear Bushra,

This was more than an experiment. It was spot on!

Funny how "time" seems to blend into eons, centuries, yesterdays and seconds.

When one is in love time stands still, or keeps rolling into eternity.....

Well penned!

Helena :)

[Bushra Naqshbandi]

Thank you so much for the encouraging review Helena. :)

[Helena]

You are most welcome dear Bushra!

[Passengerr]

You did more than succeed Bushra. Love the way you used the measure of time to relate your heart-felt memories of the of the one you love and miss. Thanks alot for sharing Bushra:-D.

[Bushra Naqshbandi]

Thank you so much! :)

[Stan Lee]

This is an amazing piece of writing. You have more than succeeded - you have triumphed!
Thanks for sharing.
:)

[Bushra Naqshbandi]

Thank you so much! :)

[Robert Vicens]

I enjoyed how this prose poem opened and closed like an accordion. An exhalation, an inhalation, an exhalation. Thumbs up.

[Bushra Naqshbandi]

Thank you so much! :)

[Delmar Cooper]

The example I like about the relative speed of time is the person who waits a minute for a kiss that lasts a minute, which minute is the longest?