A Casual Conversation

A Casual Conversation

A Poem by Bushra Naqshbandi
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A poem written for a contest based on Fibonacci sequence. Had to use a specific number of words in each verse according to the sequence.

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1 Hey!
1 Hi!
2 I say,
3 And you reply.
5 I ask if you're fine
8 A casual conversation. Separating us is a line,
4 You repeat my question
3 That's our conversation.
7 We know we love each other so
1 So?
8 So we tend to have a casual conversation
9 What are we scared of? Unanswered remains the question.
8 Is it that you want me to start?
8 Is that what lies deep inside your heart?
7 Should I be the one to profess?
6 And after that, will you confess?
4 Should I speak up?
1 Hmmm?
5 Instead of a casual conversation,
6 Should I pop up the question
2 To you?
8 But I just can't speak in such a
1 Situation
9 I guess we'll just keep having a casual conversation.

© 2015 Bushra Naqshbandi



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This is very well written. I think the numbers added to the poem in a way that improved the realistic aspect. That may not make sense, it's kind of hard to explain. Long story short, good writing choices and techniques. Great job!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Bushra Naqshbandi

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much. And don't worry I got the meaning. :)
I really enjoyed this! It was fun to read and also relatable!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Bushra Naqshbandi

2 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
you have intriguing innovative ideas

Posted 2 Years Ago


Bushra Naqshbandi

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :))
sushant

2 Years Ago

your welcome :)
Very Interesting indeed!
This is so well written...
Great job...keep writing :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Bushra Naqshbandi

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :)
Fibonacci is not a task for the faint of heart or the easily frstrayed. You did vey well on this and chose a subject that allows for flexability. Overall a well-written poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bushra Naqshbandi

2 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
That's an interesting write Bushra. Loved the casual conversation. It makes an interesting read and a very relatable work :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bushra Naqshbandi

2 Years Ago

Thank you Nazia :)
Using simple lines we use in our conversation, you made an interesting poem. It sure needs a creative mind to do this. Hats off.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bushra Naqshbandi

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much! Sure means a lot. :)
This is very different and interesting too... Hope you'll do more!!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Bushra Naqshbandi

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I'll try though I'm not really sure I could pull off something like this again. :.. read more

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Bushra Naqshbandi

Srinagar, Kashmir, India



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