For Kevin

Still playing with Haiku's.........I used to hate 'em.........LOL

You are my hope

My summer home in winter

Come back, lay with me

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

Enjoyable Haiku...got to love them. They are just a snippet of creativity! This leaves you with pure thoughts of hope and love.

[Sorry Infamous]

This was simple... this was wonderful. I can feel your longing in each word.

[N]

I love haikus. This was such a sweet, lovely poem in only a few words.
Good job; I genuinely liked reading it.

[Kelley]

Great Haiku! Now one question.....whos Kevin?

Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[aj tanze]

for such few words i think its great.!
-aj

[Sheila Kline]

It's hard for me to comment because I don't really write them..but the message is good!
Hugs, Sheila