SOUNDS OF ABUSE

SOUNDS OF ABUSE

A Poem by CAPOLAVORO
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Social issues are worthy to be explored.

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ARGH! ARGH!

I will not do it again
PLEASE!
Mother stop hitting


UGGH! UGGH!

We don't have money
PLEASE!
Don't kill my wife


AWK! AWK!

Ssto sstop choking
PLEASE!
I have a baby


SLAP! SLAP!

He raped me
PLEASE!
I did not seduce him


BWAK! BWAK!

Don't touch me
PLEASE!
Let me go
WHACK! WHACK!

You have no future
IDIOT!
You have no hope


RAT-A-TAT-TAT!  RAT-A-TAT-TAT!

Don't move
M**********R!
I'll kill you both


HAH! HAH!

That's not my baby
W***E!
Drugs is my baby


BLAH! BLAH!

You seduced him
S**T!
You're a homewrecker


SHH! SHH!

Let me have sex with you
B***H!
Don't move



© 2017 CAPOLAVORO



Author's Note

CAPOLAVORO
PAIN for red and COLD-HEARTED for blue. They are all connected and that is true. :)

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WOW!

As you know, I dont do that much poetry, so in saying that I would like to say that this poem in my eyes was very 'HARD HITTING' piece (excuse the pun, not meant to come across that way at all.

You made it even more EXTREME with the RED and BLUE.

Mark.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

CAPOLAVORO

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much Mark. :) It is good to know that you like it.
matrixmark

1 Year Ago

Powerful piece.
I wish I could add more, but its just not my area.
Thank you for shari.. read more
CAPOLAVORO

1 Year Ago

I am actually focused on the Onomatopoeia. That is why I try to make it as short as possible. :)



Reviews

"SOUNDS OF ABUSE"
CAPOLAVORO,
This writing is a special one. It gives a wake up call to the rest of us to be aware of the lives of others. It is not always apparent; the suffering of others. But in relationships I believe their are clues seen. Your poem must of been hard to write as it sure was difficult to read. So awful, so sad these issurs of dysfunction and the brokenness. Anyway keep up the good writing.
Blessings,
Kathy

Posted 6 Months Ago


CAPOLAVORO

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much Kathy. Somehow I've seen the worst of worsts so I get to express them easily. My j.. read more
Wow....don't know what to say here that hasn't already been said. It's just....fantastic.

Posted 1 Year Ago


CAPOLAVORO

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much James. :)
Don't think it gets any rawer than that. Hard hitting and to the point. Life at its worse.

Posted 1 Year Ago


CAPOLAVORO

1 Year Ago

I am so glad you felt the piece Paul Bell. :)
This is very inventive.
Well done to you.

Posted 1 Year Ago


CAPOLAVORO

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much Tony. :) Never thought I could get a positive feedback from you. For you are I tho.. read more
Tony Jordan

1 Year Ago

I dont know what gave you that idea dear poet.
Welcome.
CAPOLAVORO

1 Year Ago

Hehe nothing. Just a thought of mine. :)
wow indeed!!! this is such an accurate portrait of abuse that for personal reasons, was a hard write for me to read, tho it's a topic that's not screamed out enough & of course should be.

the imagery of honest brutality, and the feeling of the shame of the one on the receiving end, leaves an indelible mark on the reader's conscious (which ofc on a topic like this should be the goal) - brilliant dictation and use of words. reading your author's, i enjoyed the unique use of creativity . -- thank you for sharing - x





Posted 1 Year Ago


CAPOLAVORO

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much. :) I am really glad you like it.
I like it alot! Wow... very detailed and descriptive... This is really supreme! Very good job!!

Posted 1 Year Ago


CAPOLAVORO

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much Mr. Writer. :)
damn girl,you brought out the pain in this write
creative

Posted 1 Year Ago


CAPOLAVORO

1 Year Ago

No bad words wordman. :) or else I will not go to the prom with you hehe
 wordman

1 Year Ago

oh,don`t be mean to me,i was looking forward to that prom dance
very high emotions presented uniquely and well.
The author's note is brilliant in itself and really tells
the story best. nicely done!


Posted 1 Year Ago


CAPOLAVORO

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much Mercy Party. I am so glad you felt it. :)
Abuse is a sickness. The sad part. The misery received by the person abused. They learn fear and pain. Thank you dear friend for sharing he powerful poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


CAPOLAVORO

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much too. I am glad you see it that way I do. :)
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

I did and you are welcome my dear friend.
Whoa, very hard to read and powerful. As a survivor of both sexual assualt and domestic abuse, this really was a moving piece.

It's sad how these kinds of things happen and they're ignored or treated as taboo, or the victim is somehow blamed for what happened to them.

I applaud you for writing this and spreading awareness.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

CAPOLAVORO

1 Year Ago

I love it when you say as a "SURVIVOR" of sexual assault and domestic abuse. It made me feel happy t.. read more
Sinbulvinter

1 Year Ago

That's what I aim for, being a survivor and that's the most people who have been through that can do.. read more

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CAPOLAVORO

Cebu, 7, Philippines



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