SOUNDS OF ABUSE

SOUNDS OF ABUSE

A Poem by CAPOLAVORO
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Social issues are worthy to be explored.

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ARGH! ARGH!

I will not do it again
PLEASE!
Mother stop hitting


UGGH! UGGH!

We don't have money
PLEASE!
Don't kill my wife


AWK! AWK!

Ssto sstop choking
PLEASE!
I have a baby


SLAP! SLAP!

He raped me
PLEASE!
I did not seduce him


BWAK! BWAK!

Don't touch me
PLEASE!
Let me go
WHACK! WHACK!

You have no future
IDIOT!
You have no hope


RAT-A-TAT-TAT!  RAT-A-TAT-TAT!

Don't move
M**********R!
I'll kill you both


HAH! HAH!

That's not my baby
W***E!
Drugs is my baby


BLAH! BLAH!

You seduced him
S**T!
You're a homewrecker


SHH! SHH!

Let me have sex with you
B***H!
Don't move



© 2017 CAPOLAVORO



Author's Note

CAPOLAVORO
PAIN for red and COLD-HEARTED for blue. They are all connected and that is true. :)

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WOW!

As you know, I dont do that much poetry, so in saying that I would like to say that this poem in my eyes was very 'HARD HITTING' piece (excuse the pun, not meant to come across that way at all.

You made it even more EXTREME with the RED and BLUE.

Mark.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

CAPOLAVORO

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much Mark. :) It is good to know that you like it.
matrixmark

10 Months Ago

Powerful piece.
I wish I could add more, but its just not my area.
Thank you for shari.. read more
CAPOLAVORO

10 Months Ago

I am actually focused on the Onomatopoeia. That is why I try to make it as short as possible. :)



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Wow....don't know what to say here that hasn't already been said. It's just....fantastic.

Posted 10 Months Ago


CAPOLAVORO

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much James. :)
Don't think it gets any rawer than that. Hard hitting and to the point. Life at its worse.

Posted 10 Months Ago


CAPOLAVORO

10 Months Ago

I am so glad you felt the piece Paul Bell. :)
This is very inventive.
Well done to you.

Posted 10 Months Ago


CAPOLAVORO

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much Tony. :) Never thought I could get a positive feedback from you. For you are I tho.. read more
Tony Jordan

10 Months Ago

I dont know what gave you that idea dear poet.
Welcome.
CAPOLAVORO

10 Months Ago

Hehe nothing. Just a thought of mine. :)
wow indeed!!! this is such an accurate portrait of abuse that for personal reasons, was a hard write for me to read, tho it's a topic that's not screamed out enough & of course should be.

the imagery of honest brutality, and the feeling of the shame of the one on the receiving end, leaves an indelible mark on the reader's conscious (which ofc on a topic like this should be the goal) - brilliant dictation and use of words. reading your author's, i enjoyed the unique use of creativity . -- thank you for sharing - x





Posted 10 Months Ago


CAPOLAVORO

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much. :) I am really glad you like it.
I like it alot! Wow... very detailed and descriptive... This is really supreme! Very good job!!

Posted 10 Months Ago


CAPOLAVORO

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much Mr. Writer. :)
damn girl,you brought out the pain in this write
creative

Posted 10 Months Ago


CAPOLAVORO

10 Months Ago

No bad words wordman. :) or else I will not go to the prom with you hehe
 wordman

10 Months Ago

oh,don`t be mean to me,i was looking forward to that prom dance
very high emotions presented uniquely and well.
The author's note is brilliant in itself and really tells
the story best. nicely done!


Posted 10 Months Ago


CAPOLAVORO

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much Mercy Party. I am so glad you felt it. :)
Abuse is a sickness. The sad part. The misery received by the person abused. They learn fear and pain. Thank you dear friend for sharing he powerful poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Months Ago


CAPOLAVORO

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much too. I am glad you see it that way I do. :)
Coyote Poetry

10 Months Ago

I did and you are welcome my dear friend.
Whoa, very hard to read and powerful. As a survivor of both sexual assualt and domestic abuse, this really was a moving piece.

It's sad how these kinds of things happen and they're ignored or treated as taboo, or the victim is somehow blamed for what happened to them.

I applaud you for writing this and spreading awareness.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

CAPOLAVORO

10 Months Ago

I love it when you say as a "SURVIVOR" of sexual assault and domestic abuse. It made me feel happy t.. read more
Sinbulvinter

10 Months Ago

That's what I aim for, being a survivor and that's the most people who have been through that can do.. read more
Drugs is my baby...

I have nothing to say..100/100

Posted 10 Months Ago


CAPOLAVORO

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much Atashusi. :)

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Added on April 7, 2017
Last Updated on April 8, 2017
Tags: #abuse, #pain, #suffering

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CAPOLAVORO
CAPOLAVORO

Cebu, 7, Philippines



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