Wildflower dreams.

Some memories are held forever.

                       Wildflower dreams.

I sit among the wildflowers.
Growing where they desire and free.
The sweet sense of the wildflowers takes me back to you.

I remember my beautiful lady dancing with the moving trees.
Wildflowers in her hair.
Laughter in her voice.

We fell together  in the paradise of love and knowing no fear.
In the field of the wildflowers.
We learn love is free to the young and fearless in heart.

I want to travel back in time.
Dance with sweet dreams lost in a field of wildflowers.

To kiss my wildflower dream once more.
To know the beauty of real love and freedom once again.

Some dreams cannot be touched again.
We relive them is sweet dreams.
Dancing in the wind of time.

                                 Coyote
                           June 2013

Author's Note

A new poem I hope you enjoy. Any mistakes. Help a old man who appreciate the help.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

third line should be "takes me back to you"

and in the last stanza the second line tripped me up a bit..i wanted to add "that we live them..."

but wow, this is good..and yes, we can relive the past in dreams and what ifs...but we can't go back there, as much as we would like to.

such an expressive write.

jacob

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for the help. I appreciate.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Such beautiful sentiment...I'm enthralled by the concept of wildflowers and nature bringing you back to thoughts of your lady love. There is a lot in this piece that is absolutely fantastic, my friend. My only caution would be in the form and punctuation...you use a lot of periods when commas might work a little better. Overall, though, so nice...I felt this one.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading. I agree. Too many commas.

[quinfinn]

your poetry has always been very sensitive and full of wisdom. this is a new genre for you of late, very sweet and dreamlike...i too, remember the wildflowers of my youth and the beauty they provided for future memories, this is exquisite writing, john.

[veronicahudson]

you are an awsum writer no doubt bout that, hands down.

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http://www.facebook.com/pranavmuskanmalhotra
must see and like

[Ed Hart]

that last stanza is cosmic...some blues are bluer than others